My holiday writing
I went to the zoo i saw a lion a shark a crocodile and wale.
And we went to the back home and back to gran and pops.
I went to the shops with mummy and daddy and melissa and jacob.
I went to the
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My holiday writing
I went to the zoo i saw a lion a shark a crocodile and wale.
And we went to the back home and back to gran and pops.
I went to the shops with mummy and daddy and melissa and jacob.
I went to the
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
I am so proud of you son lovely writing awesome job keep up the good work love Mum xx
ReplyDeleteThank you for your reply Ann-Marie, Nathan will be happy you have commented.
Delete-Miss G